Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Hard Work

A cache of berries!
So much trouble picking them--
And they taste like shit.

3 comments:

  1. Hi, Coo!

    Is this some attempt to disprove my theory that they are the hardest poems to write? A strong effort.

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  2. One summer I went blueberry picking with my mom for the day, and when we got home I ate too many berries and got a wicked stomach ache. Then my mom had to cancel the dinner reservations she had made for my dad's birthday. So I ruined my dad's birthday. I blame blueberries. This comment has nothing to do with anything.

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  3. A good rule of thumb: 3 in the bucket, 1 in the mouth.

    I like that the title is Hard Work, which gets me already tired, but then the next line is an exclamation!

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