Friday, January 8, 2010

The Silver Face

Buskers came and went, not worth
writing about really. Jazz trumpeteer,
soul singer, Hendrix style guitarist who
staked out the Jackson stop off the blue line

and fumbled along blues chords. The good
ones closed their eyes when they played
and the bad ones did, too. In between were
the ones who nudged their open cases and
roped eye contact with a lasso. Just lives

like any other who passed by and gave money
or didn't - blinking lights in a tunnel or
split vocal chords looking to shout some
kind of noise into what is only silence ever,

the hum rumble of the trains that devours
everything. And if they do not sing? If they do not
play or burst? Suppose he stands in quiet grey

painter's clothes wearing kneepads and black boots,
boxes of junk arranged about him like an insect. His deep
gloves hide silver fingers that splay and clench
at the end of an arm akimbo, straight, akimbo
again to the silent rhythm of Billie Jean from unseen

speakers. Suppose you see all of this but you do not
really see any of it because of his face. It is silver
like the fingertips you can just make out, too
silver. You wonder at the hope that it is paint
as the contours which make a face disappear

beneath the smoothness of silver. You see hollow
slits above the nose that fill with silver at each blink,
the thin line of a mouth closed tightly, a patch
of stubble breaking through the silver smooth chin.

Suppose he does not speak. Suppose his face is set.
Yet he dances. There is no sound anywhere
but the echo of distant trains and there is horror
as you knock the face from the body and watch

it shatter, like glass.

2 comments:

  1. tim! i've seen the silver face!

    my only suggestion would be to move up "it" to the same line as "watch" at the end of the poem. and let "shatter" have more of an emphasis?

    also, "buskers" felt a bit antiquated compared to all your modern references. i had to look it up, but now it is one of my favorite words.

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  2. no! keep "it" where it is - if you put it in the previous stanza then you'd have no motivation to keep going. "And watch it" has more finality than "and watch."

    And this is good but I wanted the silver face sooner.

    And this is Harris by the way...hi!

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