Saturday, April 17, 2010

Peanuts

The husk bends beneath
beneath my fingers,
but does not break.

I press harder,
straining the stringy
fibers, to no avail.

Adding rotation,
I twist the husk,
and fruitlessly

pull in opposite directions, 
as if manipulating 
a Chinese fingertrap.

But with a final
twist, and yank,
my fingers burst through,

and I feast 
on my tiny prize,
amidst clouds

of brown, 
pulverized,
tissue-paper

seed coating, floating 
like confetti 
about my head.

1 comment:

  1. again, i think you are very adequately using food to express a clear mood/atmosphere, this one of strain and release.

    and again, you need to lose the similes. i think your next project should be banning 'as if' and 'like' from your poems.

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