interesting comment on race and nationalism, to me, though i don't know how else to read 'amber waves.' 'seem' getting its own line is either awkward or provoking... and i think you mean 'referent'?
as the only image here is 'amber waves,' and you are trying to define an ambiguous concept, i would consider a different word or an objective correlative or some trope for 'referent,' might be too many juggled concepts to keep track of.
Let's just go ahead and say it: We Are Not AVerse is an online poetry collective. Now that the pretentious part is over, here's the meat.
We are a handful of young writers - some poets, some prosers - who had the good fortune of convening in one city and sharing each other's company for a few glorious years. We are now dispersed, but hope to use this blog (collective!) to share our work with one another and maintain some part of that communal spirit (of collective responsibility to supporting each other as artists).
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interesting comment on race and nationalism, to me, though i don't know how else to read 'amber waves.' 'seem' getting its own line is either awkward or provoking... and i think you mean 'referent'?
ReplyDeleteas the only image here is 'amber waves,' and you are trying to define an ambiguous concept, i would consider a different word or an objective correlative or some trope for 'referent,' might be too many juggled concepts to keep track of.
I am with Tim on this one. BUT I'm totally with you on the whole vague pronoun pizazz.
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