I wonder if there's a way to play with it so that "only ever the enervating lash" is all on one line. It's a delightful cascade of sounds and I don't like it being broken up, but I know 'of its' isn't a very strong line on its own.
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We are a handful of young writers - some poets, some prosers - who had the good fortune of convening in one city and sharing each other's company for a few glorious years. We are now dispersed, but hope to use this blog (collective!) to share our work with one another and maintain some part of that communal spirit (of collective responsibility to supporting each other as artists).
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Me too, Taylor. Me too.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if there's a way to play with it so that "only ever the enervating lash" is all on one line. It's a delightful cascade of sounds and I don't like it being broken up, but I know 'of its' isn't a very strong line on its own.